I kind of hate having to constantly make Trey the negative voice, but he seems like the one who would, and he has a point! Seriously.
Hm…I had a little trouble with the dialogue on this one.
Ah well. The chapter starts to pick up a bit next week, so stay tuned!
Thanks for reading! See you then!
You have a typo. 1st panel you put “read” instead of ‘ready’. btw I love the way the story is going 😀 I like the second to last panel with Ry and everyone in the background. He looks ready to kick some butt. 😀 ^.^
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D.Rena Reply:
December 17th, 2010 at 1:33 pm
Oh man! Thanks for the catch! I gotta remember to go back in and fix that! 😀
And thanks! I know it’s been kind of dull lately, but I think the story’s really going to pick up from here on out!
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